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Missthang
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0 posted 2005-02-15 02:15 AM


I haven't posted in a LONG WHILE. It feels good to be back....

A lot of feelings and emotions are coming up that are conflicting with the way "I operate" when it comes to males that I'm involved with. Writing about it lately has really helped to keep my sanity. Not that it's a bad thing or that it's plaguing my thoughts or anything...it's just different. It's like, I'm feeling things that I don't ordinarily feel and I have NO IDEA how to react or respond to them. It's kinda like opposites, my heart says one thing, and my brain says another. This is my latest write to explain it all...

I’m closed; I need to break this lock.
As Chevy says, use something...like a rock.
Darkness overhead, am I wrong?
Like Motel 6, keep the lights on.
I feel like I’ve been cursed
Like Sprite, I obey my thirst.
Settling down for me is freaky
Like Gatorade, is it even in me?
Deep down I AM searching for a mate,
As Snickers says...hungry? Why wait?
A part of me wants to run away
But like Burger King, I want it my way.
Thinking about him, my mind pitches a fit
Ask Nike, should I do it?
Yet this one feels special, should give it a chance,
Like DDR, shall we dance?
I get excited, when I see he's still up
Like Polaroid, let’s see what develops...

© Copyright 2005 Adamma Bankhead - All Rights Reserved
GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2005-02-15 08:22 AM


This is really cool!
Love how you deal with something rough in your life,
but you're far from losing your humor.
I'd never have thought of doing this.
lol I like it alot!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-02-16 01:58 PM


neat write
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3 posted 2005-02-17 11:19 PM


YOU I'm gonna enjoy! Glad you opened up the pipes again.....sing, flush, whatever they do best....send it!

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