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Three Rivers

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 02-15-2005 01:12 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


A fog horn sounds
in the clouded distance.

A faint,
white, mist
passes in front
of green trees.

The sky is gray.

There is
a silence
on the surface
of the sea.

At times like these, one might believe
there could appear on the quiet shore:

the happy dog you used to have,
a friend
whose end was long ago,

that true love,

a young girl
with long hair

collecting colored stones.
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passing shadows
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displaced


1 posted 02-15-2005 04:08 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

oh how I love to read you
Ratleader
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2 posted 02-15-2005 11:15 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

I do too -- it's that good, isn't it? In Huan Yi we have a poet of true quality.

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on the threshold of a dream


3 posted 02-16-2005 12:36 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

With your words... I am there. *S*
Bridget Shenachie
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4 posted 03-01-2005 01:49 AM       View Profile for Bridget Shenachie   Email Bridget Shenachie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bridget Shenachie

You said this so beautifully and expressed thoughts so difficult to capture.  I have looked at places where my lost ones have been, and remembered how they were in that place.  

Your poetry is great reading.
Shenachie
LeeJ
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SE PA


5 posted 03-01-2005 12:13 PM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

extremely precious
miscellanea
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OH


6 posted 03-01-2005 02:51 PM       View Profile for miscellanea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miscellanea

"At times like these, one might believe..."

You painted the scene so well, visualizing becomes second nature.

      enjoyed,
            miscellanea
Honeybunch
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A great read.  Enjoyed!
Dark Angel
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8 posted 03-01-2005 03:08 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Enjoyed this Huan, felt like I was there.

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

Drauntz
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9 posted 05-01-2007 02:14 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

I just read Tow Rives. here comes three rivers.
are you going to count up or count down?

all beautiful.
 
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