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froggy
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0 posted 2005-02-14 08:10 PM



I am Your Lady

In my heart there is a place
Where all the memories of
Our times together are hidden.

Where quiet whispers Unknown to others are spoken.
in my heart you’ll always remain
for I am your lady.

© Copyright 2005 E.Griswold - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2005-02-14 08:19 PM


Nice one Froggy.

Dave

Red Dreams
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2 posted 2005-02-14 08:20 PM


lovely.
it's got this beautiful understated old-fashioned romance to it. very simple and consice and pretty.

Snow
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3 posted 2005-02-14 10:13 PM


nice read.
EvocativeVerse2
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4 posted 2005-02-15 06:36 AM


Very nice mean and green. LOL! This is a very sweet tribute to a very dear, old, antiquated, hoary, Noachian, friend. ROFLMAO! What! It is about me? Heck I meant a young, vivacious, carefree, rapscallion. A soul that knows not but laughter. Bravo! (snicker)
passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-02-15 11:20 AM


pretty
JL
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6 posted 2005-02-15 04:21 PM


Lucky one, to have such a person as you.
Excellent write.

JL


JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-04-21 06:02 PM


Nice...James
Susan
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8 posted 2005-04-21 11:13 PM


very nicely done -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

miscellanea
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9 posted 2005-04-23 09:06 PM


and a sweet Lady at that!  Very nice, Froggy!
this rolled off my tongue when I read it aloud.

             miscellanea

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