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Some Romantic Evening

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JamesMichael
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Some Romantic Evening

It was late, on an evening
in the land of paradise and I
could never make up this story
so the truth will suffice.
The candles were lit and flickering
bright and romantic music caressed
the passion of the night.

Trade winds were blowing
at least twenty five, they
blew the candles out just
as I closed my eyes.
And thats when she placed
her first kiss upon
my wanton lips.

I smelled the scent of
her perfume, I swallowed
the dew of her kiss,
never taking my mouth
off of her tasty lips,
I struggled for the air
that I breathe in
moments of bliss.

JamesLee
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2005
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1 posted 02-14-2005 05:54 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Very nice, JamesLee!  Happy Valentine's Day.   ....jo
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Passion, sweet passion James

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love it!
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love it~

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5 posted 02-19-2005 04:05 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you for the lovely peek into "the land of paradise"!

Love, Margherita
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Very nice write!

~Alli~

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7 posted 02-19-2005 11:17 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

a passionate penning-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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Thank you all for the wonderful responses...James
 
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