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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-02-14 09:47 AM


Any other heart
would not bless me
the way that you do,
because in you...

I find truth
and honesty
beyond compare

and I wish
that you weren't there,
but instead were here
so I could wrap
my arms around you
and paint us in
valentine hues

to slowly peel back
the layers of two

and whisper
Happy Valentines Day
to you.....




She just needs a little help
To wash away the pain she's felt
She wants to feel the healing hands
Of someone who understands  {big and rich}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-14-2005 11:43 AM).]

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with you
1 posted 2005-02-14 10:15 AM


Beautiful!!!
soft, sweet, romantic

Martie
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2 posted 2005-02-14 10:28 AM


Donna

Valentine hues are as lovely as you!  

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-02-14 11:35 AM


very sweet

Happy Valentine's Day Donna

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4 posted 2005-02-14 11:44 AM


Gentle
Happy ST. Valentines Day.

littlewing
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5 posted 2005-02-14 11:56 AM


beautiful Donna, worthy of one thousand Valentine's!
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6 posted 2005-02-14 12:06 PM



This is so quietly beautiful...

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2005-02-14 12:53 PM


Happy Valentines Day to all of you!
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8 posted 2005-02-14 01:34 PM


luv you sweet sis...

~~*~~
the wind sings with the calm
tranquilize in the night
sien beauty on my lips
~~**~~

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2005-02-14 01:37 PM


thanks L~ I needed that.  you always know when to hug!
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10 posted 2005-02-14 07:50 PM


Dear Donna, this is so pretty.
Just beautiful.
Hugs and Happy Valentine's Day, Sweetie

inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2005-02-14 09:56 PM


a lovely whisper
wrapped in soft pastels

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2005-02-15 07:42 AM


Thanks Ethel and Michelle, your both beautiful ladies and I thank you for the kind words!
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13 posted 2005-02-18 10:19 AM


very beautiful,
Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2005-02-18 11:06 AM


Thanks sissy!  Hugs.
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