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Huan Yi
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0 posted 02-13-2005 08:43 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Before dawn
we have come to fish the depths
for salmon

By the glow
of a carried lantern
we find our way along the shore

Wearing old clothes against the cold
we appear a couple
of many years

The sun’s
first
pink light
reflects on silent water

I watch my woman—
cast her line
into the sea


© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 02-13-2005 08:56 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

How lovely it is to see the reflection of this in your words....thank you.
Margherita
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Eternity


2 posted 02-14-2005 12:14 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

A beautiful scene. And though you appear a couple "of many years", there is the pleasure to watch her ...

Love, Margherita
iliana
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3 posted 02-14-2005 03:55 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Feel like I'm watching a silent movie.  You're good at pulling out the pictures.  ....jo
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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass


4 posted 02-15-2005 11:07 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Oh here it is! I saw this a couple of days ago but something took me away from the forums and I couldn't respond.

I still think the same: It's a beautiful thing to say and a beautiful way to say it.

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Bridget Shenachie
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5 posted 03-01-2005 01:44 AM       View Profile for Bridget Shenachie   Email Bridget Shenachie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bridget Shenachie

Such a lovely word painting to ponder.  You said so much so gently. Like the gentleness and kindness expressed here, the enduring face of love.

Shenachie
LeeJ
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6 posted 03-01-2005 12:15 PM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

this gave the reader comfort and hope, in knowing there most certainly is fidelity expressed to the thoughts of relationships...wonderful read
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oops, she caught you.
 
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