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Forsaken.................Edder & Snow spin
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Forsaken.................Edder & Snow spin |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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 art©Snow "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ok so I am waiting for the music that accompanies these lyrics  beautiful song, keeping this |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I knew that this would be great. Edder has a similar style, and nod, the two of you should do this more often. Much enjoyed.  to Edder |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Kacy- no music... i just sing em in the shower. Karen- thanks!  |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
um... the shower ? well.... alrighty then. :-D thank you both for the comments. E...as always, you knew exactly where i wanted to go this time and it couldn't have worked without you. ((hugs)) thank you "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Gee-golly-wow this is good! This poem looks so simple now that it's written, but no, it wasn't simple at all.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*shaking head in awe* |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is fantastic! really truly well done! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Brava! Well done you two! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Please... keep these wonderful duets coming... you write so well together! *S* |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
thank you all ~!!! suthern,*smile* "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A challenge from Ed -- spend a moment today, thinking about how we should treat a good person who is one of PiP's finest poets....if not this one, then one of your choice....it seems we need to. |
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