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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2005-02-13 01:34 PM

To feel the weight of
sudden fingers -

Pressed against our distance.

As if our yearning were a
solid wall of sorrow.

That gave way to constant
leaning.

If only for an instant.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2005-02-13 01:53 PM

An instant

of such intensity

to break the wall of sorrow

and give way

to an embrace of love

that knows no end.

"Leaning" is wonderful, dear Eric!

I love you.
Margherita

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-02-13 02:01 PM

The yearn to lean...
knowing there will be touch.
Excellent, Eric!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-02-13 02:04 PM

Lovely -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-02-13 02:58 PM

May you both lean in and touch someone very special...

Linda

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-02-13 03:12 PM

Beautiful Eric....lovely.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2005-02-13 03:31 PM

wonderful heartfelt writing, as always

M

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

7 posted 2005-02-13 05:50 PM

A fleeting arrow that penetrates slightly against armour that isn't chain mail.

Dave

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2005-02-13 07:07 PM

Wonderful write Eric!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2005-02-13 07:56 PM

Eric, you never cease to amaze with your
thoughts, so to the point and leaves the
reader in deep thought.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2005-02-13 10:11 PM

What wall could withstand the essense of such passion? Wonderful write Eric.
TD

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2005-02-13 10:24 PM

lovely Ericc....

~~*~~
the wind sings with the calm
tranquilize in the night
sien beauty on my lips
~~**~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2005-02-14 12:38 PM

magic

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

13 posted 2005-02-14 10:13 AM

my gosh I love how you write! *SIGH* wonderful!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

14 posted 2005-02-14 10:16 AM

Lovely!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

15 posted 2005-02-15 05:33 PM

Learning is living,
living, learning.

Excellent!

JL

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

16 posted 2005-02-15 10:39 PM

Beautifully balanced...like one domino, delicately leaning against a line of other dominoes...

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______________Ratleader______________

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

17 posted 2005-02-16 07:40 AM

tremendous, human nature...and how miraculous is life? Enjoyed!

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