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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-02-13 10:49 AM

Yesterday swirled
as tomorrow awaited...
and torrents abated.

As tides flowed quietly
and caressed the muddy
banks.

And from the tunes of vintage
plucked, a star rose in quiet
gleam....awaiting the moon’s
cradle of soft warm glow..

As do the velvet of cheeks
beside the smile...

A smile of tomorrow, gleaned
quietly, enchantingly...

Today...

[This message has been edited by Magnus (02-13-2005 12:35 PM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2005-02-13 10:56 AM

YOU enchant, dear Barry!

This is the glow of love.

Love, Margherita

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-02-13 10:59 AM

lovely-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-02-13 11:00 AM

you do bring a smile Barry

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-02-13 02:32 PM

Thanks for gifting us with a romantic soft write, Barry!

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-02-13 07:22 PM

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2005-02-13 08:06 PM

anticipation of tomorrow! how romantic a write this is!

.....jo

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2005-02-13 08:18 PM

This is a sweet treat!

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2005-02-13 08:36 PM

Inspired words Barry. Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2005-02-13 09:47 PM

stars moons and smiles
this is perfect harmony

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2005-02-13 10:19 PM

Mr. Romantic, may you have a glorious Valentine's Day!

Linda

Enotneicna
Member

since 1999-06-06

Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA

11 posted 2005-02-13 11:32 PM

Wonderful write.....enjoyed muchly

Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

molti benedizione (many blessings)
always
Eno

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

12 posted 2005-06-18 11:51 PM

Lovely,

SG

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

13 posted 2005-06-19 01:29 AM

Lovely write....

A romantic treasure!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

14 posted 2005-06-19 10:17 AM

Oh, those velvet cheeks!
Swooon...

Welcome Home as usual.
TD

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2005-06-19 10:40 AM

awww Barry beautiful....

good to see ya here....

I keep a fragrance bottle my
muse gave me when I met him
in endless winter and he
settled me into remembering
who I am.

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