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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2005-02-13 09:27 AM



I am lost unto the words
Slipped the surface to the depths
Moved by circles of the oar
Stillness to stillness

In the tide a pocket watch
Daring look into the storm
Letting go of fate, quiet in the wait
Trusting what is true

I am lost unto the words
In a peaceful life from inside out
To accept reality as fact
I will always love you

Rounded banks in merrily
Tears flow rivers happily
Moonlight blankets warm beside your dreams
Love is rarely ever what convention deems

I will always love you so it seems

Copyright Kkh 02/13/04

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-02-13 09:38 AM



The circle is unending.
A very good poem of heart, this is.

Susan
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2 posted 2005-02-13 11:06 AM


lovely thoughts here -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Margherita
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3 posted 2005-02-13 11:07 AM


"... so it seems!"

And surely the "perpetual Valentine" is the best of all!

In the stillness treasures last!

Beautiful verses.

Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-02-13 11:09 AM


I wish I could write like this
maybe one day

Ericc
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5 posted 2005-02-13 01:25 PM


Wonderful!

Eric

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2005-02-13 02:52 PM


May your every day be like one "Perpetual Valentine". A lovely write, TD!


EA

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7 posted 2005-02-13 07:20 PM


Great write!

~Alli~

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inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2005-02-13 09:21 PM


lost onto the words
when words are not suffice

perpetual yes
it's all there,written in the stars

iliana
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9 posted 2005-02-14 01:48 PM


"Love is rarely ever what convention deems" == what a line!  So true.  Enjoyed this, truly.  Happy Valentine's Day, Kathleen.   ....jo
Magnus
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10 posted 2005-02-14 04:46 PM


K..

May you be blessed with happiness and love,
with kindness and wealth,  with wisdom and
patience..through all of your life.

If the Sandman could make dreams be true,
he would...or I would kick his butt.

(After I rehang the door, sheesh)

miscellanea
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11 posted 2005-02-14 07:12 PM


TD,
   Happy Valentine's Day!  It is so good to have a minute to stop by again to read your writing!  I don't think there has ever been a time that I've read one of your poems that I haven't repeated one of your lines over and over again.  The imagery--you know!  Well, the line for my day:

   "Moved by circles of the oar"  

   So much can be interpretted within those six words!

  
        miscellanea

serenity blaze
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12 posted 2005-02-14 07:22 PM


I know this...

quiet silk slips the oar in moonlight

beautiful Kathleen

garysgirl
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13 posted 2005-02-14 07:25 PM


This is very beautiful, Kathleen.
Hugs,

LeeJ
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14 posted 2005-02-15 12:51 PM


every single line was articulated through the mind's eye...wonderful music you write
JL
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15 posted 2005-02-15 12:59 PM


Simply put: EXCELLENT!
More-over: Wonderful.
Enjoyed this write very much.

JL

LeeJ
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16 posted 2005-02-15 01:51 PM


am lost unto the words
In a peaceful life from inside out
To accept reality as fact
I will always love you


pure poetry in motion

excellent!

Kristabell
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17 posted 2005-02-15 02:19 PM


So sweet and so sentamental. I loved your words! Good immages. Keep it up.
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