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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2005-02-15 08:17 AM


Morning composes Dante’s sincerity
Flashlight ready
Attainment incarnates
Congregating enigmas, unveiling
Like wandering jugglers
Leaving their lives

Unifying human minds with
Light sound rites of the occult
Standing lakes and groves
Pressing for details

Tenuous energy touching seers
Talking bout circles
Around each sphere
Wearing a shawl of magnetic flames

A sense of wonder
Storing knowledge of ancient times
Inducing thoughts from great bookworms
With chemical change superhuman

Interweaving weaker skills
Drawing the mind’s eye
Where roses sometimes fall
Wet with animation…
Torn and floundering

Quickly joins a miraculous repertoire
Sweeping seas of mad hatters
Falling overboard
Dinosaurs of the living
Call this a wonder
I call it love’s companion

Ulysses naming things
Perhaps by curious desire
With adorning right
Simply a stain upon happenstance

Laughter seems worth the effort
If one can pause to light a fire
Merging with their reflection
Like a supernatural echo
Within the human heart

Dictating the very ocean of reality
Brings both redemption or dependence
or perhasp simply opening a door...
Light switch ignores
A world of lines & bounders
Images downloading good looking common sense
The greatness of nature
Firmly establish simple things
Calling upon for help from old friends
Fine tuning prose for the soul

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2005-02-15 09:17 AM


Where roses sometimes fall
Wet with animation…
Torn and floundering

sounds like an enchanting walk , entertaining
and without any fences

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2005-02-15 11:32 AM


"Dictating the very ocean of reality
Brings both redemption or dependence
or perhasp simply opening a door...:

So true!  Beautiful walk indeed Lee J.


JL


iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2005-02-15 09:29 PM


"Laughter seems worth the effort
If one can pause to light a fire
Merging with their reflection
Like a supernatural echo
Within the human heart"

My, oh my, Miss LeeJ.....all I can saw is WOW.   ......jo


Midnitesun
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since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
4 posted 2005-02-16 12:49 PM


"Ulysses naming things
Perhaps by curious desire
With adorning right
Simply a stain upon happenstance"

smiling at this, and making me want to read that storyline again

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