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A February Dawn
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A February Dawn |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
A February Dawn my eyes lift toward the pale, pale azure wisped with white fluff streaked with a pilot’s trails drenched with the residue of sunlight a clawing forms upon my heart and just behind my eyes a pool of tears collects as I ponder “Is there enough?” a query forms within me, “Is there enough?” enough what? I don’t understand the fullness of the question yet the question remains; it is filled with power it creates acrid tears of longing without comprehension of for what the longing clamors in its silent weeping ©February 12, 2005 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
is there enough? this has me pondering |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yes..that says it all~~ like it lots! hugs M |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sometimes i wake up the same way too and just don't know |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
What came to my mind here after reading your poem is the verse that says that the spirit is willing but the body is weak... Sometimes, I believe that we just don't know what the spirit is trying to tell us, but, oh, what a beautiful beautiful cleansing experience it seems that you enjoyed here. Thank you for sharing -Bob |
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