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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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If As she walked By the lake It was no longer the facts In which she moved What of that She was free For a moment at least To surround herself In a geography Of her own To become The woman Only woman For whom The night was still A special place Where what she hoped Covertly was possibly actual The home toward which For her and her alone Orion trekked the void |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Huan Yi Interesting write, enjoyed the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed this!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
She was free For a moment at least To surround herself In a geography Of her own ...do this all the time Enjoyed M |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
Too good, you are too good. I enjoy this very much. Kaz |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Reading my mind, huh?! This is lovely and exactly the place I wanted to be!  .....jo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This had me long before I reached the end... but those lines reminded me of all the times I've watched Orion rise above my Dad's house in winter... and how it often seems to be there just for me. *S* Beautiful write!!! *S* |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
Oh wow... Loved this. |
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