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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2005-02-11 10:42 PM



Where the sea washes gently
on a paradise shore,
where stars have watched us
for so many lives
and palmettos shred notes
from distant guitars,
please sip tonight
from the chalice moon,
enjoy the soft breeze
and the orchids’ glow,
know that I love you
and dream of a world
where soon is a word
dressed in silk,
and blessed by the gods.

©2005 by icebox

© Copyright 2005 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-02-11 11:03 PM


icebox

This touches me big!  

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2005-02-11 11:14 PM


Beautiful!  "paradise shore" - yes, I guess we all know of one.
iliana
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3 posted 2005-02-11 11:49 PM


Icebox, this is absolutely lovely in its flow and content!   ......jo
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4 posted 2005-02-12 12:55 PM


beautiful you
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2005-02-12 05:40 PM


oh I feel the love pouring from this, just really very beautiful.

Lucky the person this is for.

Maree

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

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6 posted 2005-02-12 07:12 PM


Beautiful write!

~Alli~

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7 posted 2005-02-12 07:36 PM


and this is beautifully charming.


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