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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2005-02-11 05:32 PM



In my sleep

Your breathing awakens my dreams
A slow and steady assuredness
Rhythmic in its sound

Beating back the day into the night
Breathe upon breath soothing me to sleep
Soft melodies of sweet peace

I drift into a fantasy land of hopes and promises
Colors and sounds unlike any on earth
All unlocked only when I sleep next to you

My dearest dream maker in the night
How I love your presence
Each second of rest brings me a heavenly bliss

The only fear I have tonight
Will be to wake up
Without you by my side


By Thomas Goldsworthy


© Copyright 2005 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2005-02-11 06:56 PM


You got this to perfection.

Dave

Margherita
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2 posted 2005-02-12 04:40 AM


True coziness in this one.
Beautifully rendered, dear Thomas.
Love, Margherita

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3 posted 2005-02-12 07:08 PM


Amazing write!

~Alli~

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Thomas119gold
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4 posted 2005-02-14 04:35 PM


Thank you I appreicate your comments they inspire me to write more.

Tommy

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