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Elan
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since 2002-05-03
Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

0 posted 2005-02-11 01:57 PM



Holding you,
as I did,
was more than my pleasure

being held by you,
as you did,
was knowing life fulfilled;

but loving you
as I do
is to know God's gift.

Touch me
all the time
but more importantly
and especially
the last time.

Lady Élan
My only sense of direction is...Up.

© Copyright 2005 Elan - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2005-02-11 02:09 PM


beautiful
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-02-11 02:20 PM


How lovely Elan..
So good to read you once again.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

jellybeans
Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298

3 posted 2005-02-11 02:22 PM


beautiful is right....and exquisitely so....
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