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choshi
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0 posted 2005-02-11 11:39 AM



Say I am terse;
but what more would words add
as our eyes meet-
the dawning sun peeks in
through breeze-rippled curtains.

~P

© Copyright 2005 Paul C. Cooper - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-02-11 11:41 AM


the warm glow of this is most evident and burning...lovely
Elan
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2 posted 2005-02-11 11:51 AM



Choshi, as beautiful as these are,
I would enjoy more posts from you.

They are akin to unexpected gifts,
and candy kisses.

choshi
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3 posted 2005-02-11 12:04 PM


Thank you Elan, I deeply appreciate your encouragement...as the inspiration allows something new to ripen into form, I will be eager to post....warm wishes  ~P
choshi
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4 posted 2005-02-11 12:05 PM


Thank you Lee, I appreciate your comment and sensitivity....~P
iliana
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5 posted 2005-02-11 12:38 PM


Paul, I get mental pictures of a living scene everytime I read your verses.  Have to agree with Lee and Elan.   ....jo
choshi
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6 posted 2005-02-11 12:41 PM


"Paul, I get mental pictures of a living scene everytime I read your verses.  Have to agree with"

Thank you ~Jo...I deeply appreciate your encouragement and sensitivity...~P

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2005-02-11 01:18 PM


What woman would need words when in your soul-expressive presence?


EA


choshi
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8 posted 2005-02-11 01:35 PM


Oh my, Linda, you are an angel...now I am truly speechless....    back  ~P
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-02-11 01:50 PM


choshi
A lovely write, enjoyed.

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10 posted 2005-02-11 02:07 PM



choshi
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11 posted 2005-02-11 02:17 PM


Thank you Sy, glad you enjoyed  ~P
choshi
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12 posted 2005-02-11 02:17 PM


For Dixie:       ~P
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13 posted 2005-02-11 11:21 PM


Paul~
Yes ... this is splendidly penned~
Muchly enjoyed the thoughts that came to me as I read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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