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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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I wonder who you are You, who used to love me In the distance you stay and there you'll always be Your like the passing wind I feal, but I can't see. My spirit lingers in limbo It cannot decide where to be Entrapped I search for an excape I contemplate a way to be free -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Your like the passing wind I feal, but I can't see. My spirit lingers in limbo It cannot decide where to be" A very compelling write. These two verses speak volumes for me. Excellent write. JL |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
They speak volumes to me, too! Enjoyed the clarity in this. miscellanea |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
"I wonder who you are..." yes indeed! Great poem ~P |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how much I understand!  |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
Very nice and heartfelt New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire |
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Red Dreams Member
since 2005-01-09
Posts 90massachusetts |
oo, that's nice |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you very much for reading my poem. I am glad yo enjoyed it. It's why I write Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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