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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-02-11 07:49 AM



he who speaks to trees
sound your strum of wind
linger at her hollows
when she births the day
to dreamspeak laughter

the watchers wear water gowns
their footprints are eyes
looking for sky places
to be their dry mouthed gods
and they hear the jackel stir

her chains are tin foil metal
and her bosom is the heavy song
of confusion without handles
there at the creeks there is ruin
ice castles have been burned

and the dragons swim with dolphins


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dark  (scribblenote:storm coming..some are praying some are playing and some are heading to the beach)

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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-02-11 08:33 AM



A recent trip home allowed me time to sense
my surroundings from a bird's eye view...
the pellmell of my home state
is just that...everyone out searching
their own reason to face the storm...

IWIHWT...

So, to the library with you...

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-02-11 09:20 AM


I would so, love to be near the ocean whilst a storm engulfs..I was for small ones, and nature certainly paints with beautiful dark colors....greys, blacks, purples...

Just be safe and keep that Harley dry...smiles and hugs

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-02-11 10:09 AM


Love the feel of this D - and that last line - killer fine- could go for a swim with them -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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