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like you were love.
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like you were love. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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"..i thought i felt your shape but i was wrong, really all i felt was falsely strong.." you'll sing those words like you were love and you were heartache all in one my lungs will fill with this new idea this new thought and.. oh and i'll pull the covers up to my neck breathing deep this emotion your words will fly through the air i'll try and catch them because this is something different could i risk losing it? i'll let your words be my blanket and i'll never have to sleep again. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
exhale Mixed emotions but enjoyed the read. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
could feel the pull of emotions in this exhale.. very well done, I've been wondering where you have been. *s* |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
You inspire me. |
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