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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2005-02-10 05:54 PM



deep moist organic

air filling with awareness

life in tidal streams

realization's need

soaring clutch of love's sunlight

deeply driven roots


©2005 by icebox

© Copyright 2005 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-02-10 06:01 PM


icebox

This is familiar, and still very beautiful!  

icebox
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in the shadows
2 posted 2005-02-10 08:15 PM


*laugh*

could be.  I was cleaning out a bunch of stuff today and found a group of poems that I had not posted (or at least I believed I had not posted).  

Maybe my brain is more dead than I thought. I'll just dump them all; it's better that way than to be tedious.



DavePage
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3 posted 2005-02-11 03:32 PM


You write stuff and you think it has the attributes you described and then someone starts telling you they like it.

At least it makes a difference from someone writing the same stuff all the time.

Dave

iliana
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4 posted 2005-02-11 03:54 PM


Yes, that would be it!  Well said!   .....jo
latearrival
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5 posted 2005-02-11 04:14 PM


Icebox, don't dump, repost if they  were indeed posted before. best,marty
miscellanea
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6 posted 2005-02-11 04:23 PM


Nice!  Enjoyed!

         miscellanea

Opoetry4me
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7 posted 2005-02-11 04:53 PM


Ice I am so impressed by you. Excellent write. ~~Opoetry4me
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2005-02-12 12:46 PM


can't believe I missed this one

nicely done

*Alli4000*
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9 posted 2005-02-12 06:00 PM


Wonderful write!

~Alli~

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