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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2005-02-10 07:25 AM


down off the 95
there behind the haden
on summer afternoons they come
to stretch their bulges
and fill their eyes
with hems and skin
and harley tin at the inn
that the locals named soothedsinz

tattoo'd man does the handlebars
behind the bar
steering the kegs
to belly bust laughter
and rakes in some coins
when a passer by
wants an order of vietnamese 8
on the table in back

or maybe some nickle nine
from a tight rack gypsy
and yes she is at least
maybe 9.9 wearing that hem
and lean over grin
too tall for the stairs
but they do stare
when she serves the bulges

dripping her special dressing

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dark

scribblenote: the "inn" has no posted name but it does have the coldest beer in idaho, bulge burgers are a full meal deal that make the arteries hard, vietnamese 8 is a form of pool on a table without pockets and nickle nine is 9 ball for $5 per ball..etc etc..

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-02-10 07:32 AM


Enjoyed this, sounds like a place to kick back and enjoy life.  Enjoyed the scribble note too.     
sleepy morning hugs to you.....

choose to chance the rapids,
dare to dance the tides...
{Garth}

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2005-02-10 07:46 AM


sounds like a feast
i'd like to be served on

good morning out there

Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-02-10 07:49 AM


I think I like the scribble notes
as much as the poetry itself...


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-02-10 07:56 AM


the early pretties make me smile
thanks to you GS, ms inky and sunshine for the waves. and sunshine..the scribblenotes help me remember where I was and how I go there ....hugs ladies1

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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5 posted 2005-02-10 08:01 AM


we used to have bunches of these places way back when, you rode your Harley, I rode my horse, and along the way would pick up a bunch of riders...we'd ride all day, stop for a few, play some pool...great steak sandwhiches...one was called the Elephant Hotel....and is still there.  

Thanks for the memories.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2005-02-10 10:19 AM


I guess you can find the neat places in life when you ride

maybe I should go borrow my brother's Harley

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
7 posted 2005-02-10 10:28 AM


Mmmm - would like to hang there and see the colors of living - maybe serve up some smiles on a platter of artery heaven and wink at the bartender -

Enjoyed the weave of this -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Indigo
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

8 posted 2005-02-10 11:38 AM


with hems and skin
and harley tin


Is that kinda like 'snips and snails and puppydog tails?' ;-)

You paint my eyes with tobacco rain and my heart with bad girl blue when you write like this, D.

Indigo  

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
9 posted 2005-02-10 11:46 AM


lee j, thanks lady friend, yep it is kind of a throwback to the good ol day dream places

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ps, let some scooter skin take you for a ride
so you can just hang on and enjoy..thanks for your eyes on my ink

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susin, got your chaps? and your hongries?
and a whole lot of time...they serve slow I hear..thanks hon for the read and smilez

_________________

indi, you shimmer pretty with the comtimplation and cook some smile sides with your replies, thank you for the early wave

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