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Huan Yi
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0 posted 02-09-2005 07:35 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


It was so good
to sleep
with her beside,

the darkness warm.

The red sun,
not wanting to leave
his blue love,

slowly...
rises.
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-09-2005 07:54 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


The imagery
is beautiful, John.

Thank you.
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 02-09-2005 08:43 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Excellent response to the challenge, this really captures it perfectly.  Well done.
iliana
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This is lovely; very visual.  
passing shadows
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nice
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vrey romantic.

beautiful.
 
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