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Open Poetry #34

Hello my name is Independence.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-02-09 01:44 AM

"Hello my name is Independence
and i'll be your server."

this is what i say everyday
even if peple don't hear it like that

"What may i get you
that can clog your arteries today?"

i'll clean your tables
and take your orders

"Which section do you prefer?
cancer, or cancer free?"

i'll serve your food
and take your 2 percent tips

"No that's alright
i'll pick your fork up off the ground
so you can stare at my ass."

i'll take you to your seats
and tell you our specials today

"Hello my name is Chelsea,
and i'll be your server."

this is what i say everyday
even if people don't hear it ~~like that.~~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-02-09 01:55 AM

Brilliant, Chelsea!

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

2 posted 2005-02-09 04:53 AM

go you!!!

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-02-09 01:36 PM

This is an excellent exhale! Brava!

Red Dreams
Member

since 2005-01-09

Posts 90
massachusetts

4 posted 2005-02-09 02:33 PM

nice.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-02-09 05:10 PM

Always did like waitresses and hostesses...James

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2005-02-09 08:05 PM

Cancer free section, please - I'd much prefer the high cholesterol and heart atack on a plate, thank you -

grinning - a good server makes all the difference when dining out - he/she is of great value - and in this diner's eye - much appreciated

enjoyed this expression -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2005-02-10 07:51 AM

i know what you mean about serving the 'public'
and many kicks i had to hold back

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