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Two Halves (Response to Valentine's Challenge)
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Two Halves (Response to Valentine's Challenge) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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It’s the way you say my name. I hear it in your voice. Life’s not been the same, Not difficult, the choice. It’s the way you “got the joke” Of words before I spoke. Days when you’re not near, I still feel you here. It’s the way you hum that tune, When I’m not in the room. I still can hear you humming it, Humming a Blue Moon. It’s the way that things just go When you let your feelings show. Like magnets, how we draw. I think, surely, you must know. Will you be my Valentine? Love me ‘til the end of time? Whisper springtime to my soul? Two halves of us make a whole. [This message has been edited by iliana (02-09-2005 02:03 AM).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
A challenge well met, I would say!  "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Why thank you, ESP!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Jo, this is sooo lovely and I would add touching too. Love, Margherita  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a challenge met with heart and mind, terrific write |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Beautiful Jo, How could a guy resist....  ~P |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you used the word 'love'....  I am teasing you....this is a delight to read and challenge well met! Thank-you  hugsssss~~*~~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hmmm I think this poem speaks to two halves making a soul...   |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
jo, this is precious |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well done |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lovely addition to the challenge. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, Jo! I'm sure "he" will say yes to all the questions. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Greeneyes! Glad you read it. Couldn't resist....sorry. lol |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Dear Poets, all, thank you for reading and posting. It's so nice to be back here at PiP. to each of you special folks .....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a treat! Today I got to read two of your newest poems! I have been missing your wondrous poetic and kindred presence on these seas of blue! Ships ahoy, me matey! This poem struck a loving chord in my own heart! It truly was lover-ly, lily jo! Enjoy the journey! Love you, my friend! Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
*winks* at my Earth Angel! I will, no matter what! Thanks for posting, dear one. It's good to be back. love you....lily |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Adoring, this is. |
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