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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-02-08 09:40 PM



One Rose Away From Loving You
*~Marge Tindal*~



Borne on wings of petaled rose
the love I have grows and grows
Reaching places within my heart
that will not let your memory part
Petals falling open-faced, laced with
beauty they do represent my love sent
Their fragrance reaching far into the
night, touching noses with delight
Far away, you must know,
delight sent wafting
on this rose

~just one~
~rose~
~l~
~l~
~away~ l ~from~
~loving you~
~~~l~~~
~l~
l
l
l
l
~l~
l
l




*A specially-ordered re-potting from the archives of my heart
Happy Valentine's Day


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2005 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2005-02-08 09:41 PM


Marge, I loved the layout of this awesome blossom!   ....jo
kayjay
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2 posted 2005-02-08 09:43 PM


Let's see...if I give you one an hour for the day...hmmmm  
Nice to read your warmth, Marge.  Beautiful poem.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-02-08 09:46 PM


Dear Marge...this is simply lovely!!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-02-08 09:56 PM


Marge,
You are a love.

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5 posted 2005-02-08 10:16 PM


LOL I was looking for the picture  (photograph)....alas it is the poem....sweet love,   Marge.....it blooms beautifully  from your eyes and heart.....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

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6 posted 2005-02-08 11:43 PM


Deaar Marge:  Lovely layout, as usual!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-02-08 11:49 PM


Beautiful...James
Betty
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8 posted 2005-02-09 07:48 AM


This is just beautiful Marge
Love ya,
Betty

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9 posted 2005-02-09 08:24 AM


lovely layout, beautiful words lady!
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10 posted 2005-02-09 08:30 AM


smiles and hugs....you ought to repot more often, cuz I love reading your songs, new or archived....wonderful
James_A_Fraser
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11 posted 2005-02-09 09:46 AM


Sweet.... I don't know which I like better, the poem or the way you molded it into something that's a pleasure to the eye whether it's read or not....



~~J

GG
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12 posted 2005-02-09 09:50 AM


And it's proven...
even the archives of your heart
are sweet like a rose.

Lovely write...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

passing shadows
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13 posted 2005-02-09 10:46 AM


amazing talent you have Marge

very creative!

NewEnglandlazurlu
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14 posted 2005-02-09 11:00 AM


Marge, this is beautiful. No one can do picture poems like you. And I am, as always, glad to be a part of your life.  

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

Margherita
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15 posted 2005-02-09 01:17 PM


This is delightful, in presentation and content, dear Marge.
Love and hugs.
Margherita

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16 posted 2005-02-09 10:21 PM


This is so beautiful, Marge. I wish I had atleast half of the talent you have. Then, I could write beautiful poetry, just like you.
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17 posted 2005-02-11 11:25 AM


I need a better vocabulary... for "beautiful" doesn't even begin to do this justice....

But beautiful it is. *S*

Lighthousebob
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18 posted 2005-02-11 02:15 PM


No roses blooming here this time of year, but I do believe that my nose was stirred here by this lovely rose. Thank you for reposting this one and a Happy Valentine's Day to you. -Bob
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