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Blue ribbons - Greeneye's Valentine's challenge
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Blue ribbons - Greeneye's Valentine's challenge |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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Valentine's day is a colorful day and a day for people shy Who dare not speak their mind out loud and that is truly why They're sending cards with sweet little words, saying they fancy you And I will sit and ponder all night, who I'm supposed to fancy too I like to share the inner me, on Valentine's day with you My mind, my soul and you know what? I'll throw in some knuffels too I'll wrap myself in paper white, blue ribbons all around And set myself in a public place, where I for sure can be found So…if you fancy me sweet friend, just walk that path of hope And grab your chance, because this day is not a day to mope ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
wonderful response to the challenge Titia. Good to see you here dear. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well look at her beribboned treat! Happy Valentine's Day, Titia! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That's lovely and cute, dear Titia! Love, Margherita  |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 lovin this much! and especially the wrapping in white paper in a public place....sweet....thank you! ~~*~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Titia, you really captured the charm of the day in this one. Very sweet treat!  ....jo |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your "inner me" is a beautiful sight, Dutchie, as is this poem. Happy (early) Valentine's Day!  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Bless, this is lovely! "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this made me smile |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
big hugs and smiles for a challenge well met, adding a bit of humor and innocence...lovely write |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
HaaHaaHaa I've never tried anything of the sort but in my "dotage" I could probably get away with it just for the sport! Enjoy the day! e |
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