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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2005-02-08 11:15 AM



    
Painting by Michele Feder
***

Wrapped in your fragrance
I walk through my days,
every move brings a collision,
a close encounter of our cells.
Through compelling spirals
like dancers we converge,
at the peak of our reach
we touch and we merge.
For a moment we linger
suspended in bliss,
then with a tremor we exhale
before parting again.

A thought is enough
to convey your smile,
to lose myself
in your mesmeric eyes.
I do not need to know
about escape velocity,
for in your embrace
I’m held by my choice.
Within your essence
I find all the light
and all the grace
I need to be alive.

Wherever I am
there you are too.
No play of hide and seek
will ever be a challenge
neither for me nor for you.
On the sweet waves
of our soul song
we travel through life
and at all times
we simply know
where we belong.

You are my compass
You show me the way.
Together we dance
through the darkest nights,
through jungle roads
and rainy days.
The sparks of our passion
compete with the stars,
they too obey
the law of gravity,
which keeps everything
in flowing motion,
and makes it last
throughout eternity.
***


Love, Margherita


© Copyright 2005 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-02-08 11:21 AM


beautiful poem for the challenge Margherita!
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2 posted 2005-02-08 11:54 AM


Margherita~

'in your embrace
I’m held by my choice'


That sure says it all for me~

Little Simon's picture is Precious ... thank you for sending it to Delaney and Landry~
Delaney was so cute ... she asked me if we invited Simon to her birthday party this coming Saturday !!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-02-08 11:59 AM


this is precious!
Margherita
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4 posted 2005-02-08 12:00 PM


Thank you dear Donna and dear Dixie!

And thank you dear Marge. That would be fun if they could meet at the birthday party! Maybe when they are grown up they will cross the ocean and meet...

Love, Margherita  

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5 posted 2005-02-08 09:13 PM


Beautiful...simply beautiful.

Challenge well met.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

iliana
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6 posted 2005-02-08 09:25 PM


Margherita, this was beautiful!  Liked the painting, too.   ......jo
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7 posted 2005-02-08 10:18 PM


You have such a beautiful and loving soul....thank you for sharing this....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2005-02-09 05:14 PM


Lovely...James
Susan
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9 posted 2005-02-09 08:07 PM


Wonderful physics lesson in the workings of love -

much enjoyed -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2005-02-09 08:20 PM


Margherita, you have such a loving heart. It appears that you have found the perfect match. He sounds as wonderful as you are!

May this be the best Valentine's Day ever! ~ for both of you!


Linda
Cupid

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11 posted 2005-02-13 10:42 PM


Nice to have such sure direction!
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