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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-02-08 07:46 AM


satin sky morning
shadows under as ocean
make love horizon
______________
dark

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-02-08 07:47 AM


ohhh...

damn.

perfect!
Good morning big guy....

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-02-08 08:30 AM



Star studded snowflakes
adrift, drifting, scenery
satiny lacings

Susan
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3 posted 2005-02-08 10:45 AM


Ooooh - this is exquisite in all its texture-

Love - Susan

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Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-02-08 11:03 AM


gs, thanks lady friend, you smile me
___________

sunshine, you are a treat for the eyes, thank you
___________

susan thank you for your eyes and your love
wear mine as your morning

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2005-02-08 12:03 PM


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satin sky morning
shadows under as ocean
make love horizon
______________

pretty puff of pink
clouds rip the skys sedation
deluge of dark lust

inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2005-02-08 12:05 PM


oopss
sorry if i soiled your softsky

passing shadows
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7 posted 2005-02-08 12:07 PM


pretty
Indigo
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8 posted 2005-02-08 01:29 PM


pressing sky seam's will
morning erupts ocean wet
and satin rippled.

And a lovely one it was too... sunrise, I mean.

Indigo

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