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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China 
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Lost amongst the emerald blossoms Watching as the leaves tumble to the ground Love filling the heart with its' grandeur Finding it hard to sleep The desire for another causes this tossing and turning Getting lost amongst the sheets Is it fantasy or is it reality Sleep walking with her image tattooed on my eyelids It just seems to happen every time I close my eyes Fallen into dream scapes unparallel The down has gone to the left The up can not be seen Yet her image plays on Is it all a dream or has reality bled in Her beauty seems to get lost in translation Nothing seems to be the same Fumbling for words Discovering emotions that have lay dormant Revealing a soul once thought to be dead A beauty worth giving immortality up for Where do you go when all you see is beauty? Falling down happy Wishing for her hand to grace yours To hold it near your heart Laying in bliss Amongst the sheets Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. Today never ends for those who live it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This is an incredibly good write Poe. Enjoyed the fall immensely. TD |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I enjoyed very much this tumble of beautiful words. Lovely writing. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Is it fantasy or is it reality does it matter you're still blessed with dreams while many go dreamless  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
The desire for another causes this tossing and turning sometimes I think it's really a case of wanting something because we know we don't have it???? And want it even more, and I don't know if that's what this meant, but if it is...God bless you Written with truth to self...poignant and some good introspection here...thank you [This message has been edited by LeeJ (02-08-2005 01:41 PM).] |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
Thank You passing shadows. Thank You ThisDiamond, I am glad the fall immensely. Thank You Gentle Spirit I am glad you enjoyed the tumble. Thank You inkedgoddess, this is true though it was not my point. Thank You LeeJ, I am glad that you enjoyed it . That was partially the message with the poem. However there was another as well. Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Gee Poe: This made me think of little green promises, and just how intoxicating the autumn truly is. Had to read again. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautiful poem, poe! |
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