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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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“didn’t you know…” with dancing eyes her tale starts its spin …” that there is a hyena and he is the fastest animal on earth and he only has two legs! And he can change into a unicorn and he can move his legs to where he needs them one on his stomach and one on his back and he has the biggest scariest teeth and he can change into every kind of lion or cheetah…” And when questioned about the validity of this ‘creature’, she assures with a nod of head and an oh yes, she has pictures in a book at home. The serpent with practiced deception softly hisses “didn’t you know… that one big BANG created the universes and there is no proof to credit creation to a God, who if he had a Son would preposterously send him down here to be killed and sacrificed for all our so called sins, oh yes a big bang is much more likely. Just look at all the billions of stars, does this God have a Son for each of those worlds too?” And when questioned about the lack of proof for such an explosive theory he quickly turns his trump - no Creator negates the worry of eternity. Nailed to a cross, with arms spread wide God in the form of a man bleeds His love to a world of souls not even born yet… Do you not know that I love you this much? [This message has been edited by jellybeans (02-08-2005 06:45 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nailed to a cross, with arms spread wide God in the form of a man bleeds His love to a world of souls not even born yet… Do you not know that I love you this much? JB? I have no words. Lovely this... lovely you. So very happy that you have come home, you were so very missed, and needed.  The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"didn't you know...?" ~*~ Umhumm...I knew very well that you could create something this remarkable... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah lady, thank you, sometimes I worry that my poetry is 'preaching' but as I gave my pen to God, He gets to direct the path of the words  *long deep breath* yep I missed being here too |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
sunshine, thank you, my son's little one and her 'vivid' imagination got this one started but God directed the ending |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
jellybeans I saw a child's creature in the beginning and your belief in the end. So very well done!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome!!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Amen. Great write! JL |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you.....I really can't claim the fame for this one it came out of nowhere...and just wrote itself glad you enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JellyGal~ 'Nailed to a cross, with arms spread wide God in the form of a man bleeds His love to a world of souls not even born yet… Do you not know that I love you this much?' Remarkable ... I enjoy God's ink in your well~ Lovely, sweets~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Wow, you did a really good job with this one. Thank you for sharing His love once again... Ben “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Jelly, awesome write demonstrating great love...I can just see this scene. Yes....! ....jo |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very powerful indeed |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
your faith is amazing!  ~~*~~ |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh I am so happy to share my faith with you and the Love of our Savior thank you all! |
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