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Huan Yi
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At dinner—after years apart—
He looks right
And she looks left
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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I think it's amazing that they both still have an appetite m'self.

You do this well, John.

And I must add, it sure sounds like you've been there.
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neat write
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oft have seen this, as I'd waitressed a good part of my life...and hoped I'd never be them...sad, isn't it....

Well done
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Spot on but I think you forgot the cartel, especially one that attacks a woman who is seen to no longer have a man and is a competitor and who then fails to allow someone to arrange their life, as the other person feels it should be.

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they sat side by side.

I am laughing. why bother.
old emotion was again ignited.  
then why title love instead of

"cold"

cold dinner
colder face
coldest eyes.
 
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