Is their no end to your love

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Soulfisher
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since 2005-01-07

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where ever the fly fishing is good

0 posted 2005-02-06 04:54 AM

With my arms held tight
in the clutch of your love.
You carried me thru
the depths of despair
of the life of hell
I was living in.
If it weren't for your mercy
raining down on me.
Death would have become me.
Instead when the world went out
you came in.
Just to say
you still wanted me.
Thru the smoke and ashes
a hand extended to me.
You rose me up
and introduced me
to that thing called love.
When I meet a man
named Compassion.
Though I still stumble
his hand is still in mine.
For in the shadow of your wings
I have found my refuge.
You taught my hands to war,
my heart to love
and my knees
the escence of humbleness.
When I took my first steps
into that of my own destiny.
You gave me a gift.
A heart shapped token
of promise.
Flowing in fine golden wires
and two steel blue sapphires
to adorn.
On the inside
of the heart
you scribbed the letters
K LEW.
Now how do
I began to
thank you
for you
know who.

[This message has been edited by Soulfisher (02-06-2005 12:21 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2005-02-06 09:31 AM

Soulfisher
Interesting write, enjoyed the read.

Soulfisher
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since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

2 posted 2005-02-06 09:42 AM

Glad you enjoyed it Mr. Seymor

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-02-06 12:29 PM

a heart felt tumble of words down the page - enjoyed their song

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2005-02-07 07:12 PM

An awesome write if I say so myself.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-02-07 07:14 PM

a beautiful spilling of love to the intended person. Well done.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

6 posted 2005-02-07 07:22 PM

A very lovely declaration of love...much enjoyed!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2005-02-07 07:30 PM

If it weren't for your mercy
raining down on me.
Death would have become me.

I felt that way once...

not sure "for you know who" is..but it's a beautiful poem

M

Soulfisher
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since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

8 posted 2005-02-07 07:34 PM

Martie, gentlespirit,theLoner23, and susan glad you all could take a stroll thru my tumble of heart felt words.

Though it has never stepped past fear
would you still accept my heart
knowing that it is all I have to give.

Soulfisher
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since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

9 posted 2005-02-07 07:41 PM

Naked thoughts you snuck in their on me.
The you know who is the you know who. or the gift and gift giver. Thanks for reading

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