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Open Poetry #34

love her till tomorrow.

exhale
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since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-02-06 12:59 PM

sleep through tonight
don't let the moon wake you
because he's on his way
his clothes are gone
and so is he
you thought that maybe
maybe
maybe
he might not fly
like he always does
he might not leave
like he always does
in the night
while the world sleeps
and while the heart is intact
"love her till tomorrow"
but he never could

sorry it's been so long.

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2005-02-06 01:09 AM

that was beautiful,sad but beautifuly written

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2005-02-06 09:47 AM

very melancholy write, with that sharp tinge to it. Hard to find a keeper... maybe someday, though, right? *sigh*

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2005-02-06 10:03 AM

exhale
Sad but well written.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-02-06 10:58 AM

that's sad

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2005-02-06 12:35 PM

A dream of lasting love beautifully rendered.

Nice to see you are back.

Love, Margherita

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