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Open Poetry #34

I'll go for a Valentine

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2005-02-03 08:51 PM

You travel in a crowd but drawing men as dripping blood flowing in spirals changing yellow to red to thorns in the toss of a head

You grew in full flower climbing the walls of the house throwing roots deep down to be fed nurtued with blood and bone

To grow another year

You told me never bring roses so roses grow so I never bring them they dance the year in spines drawing my blood throughout the year

To feed them

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2005-02-03 08:55 PM

Ah, interesting piece - and analogy - i like it -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-02-03 09:01 PM

Thanks Susan.

I think you lipstick has smudged on the left hand side.

Early for valentine but better early and smudged than late and all fixed.

regards

Dave

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