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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2005-02-03 03:59 PM




I have soared past mountains steep
through old valleys wide, over great ocean deep
with a White Dove, by my side

I was lifted up by her wings, and how that shook me so
and as she watched the rain pour from me
she never let me go

She stayed  until I laughed, and helped me to pray
she showed me where the lord was
on that hopeless day

I felt his hand upon my shoulder, I felt his gracious love
thanks to Rebecca, our one and only Dove.


I will never forget that day

Thank you Rebecca....
You are our White Dove, truly a special Angel

Prayers and thoughts continue


note: this was taken and edited (big time)from an old poem Rebecca challenged me to write back in '99'


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DavePage
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1 posted 2005-02-03 04:39 PM


Livingstone Seagull has to have some influence.

Great words and I felt like I was reading Jonathon Livingstone Seagull again.

I could feel the wind, the rain, the clouds, the spirit.

Dave

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2 posted 2005-02-03 04:39 PM




I know how proud Rebecca was
of you then for accepting her
challenge - I know how proud
she is of you now.

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3 posted 2005-02-03 06:43 PM


Maree makes me want to give you the biggest dang big ole Canuck hug this does.  Becca has sure had that effect on people, always has, as does her Mom, Rae.  They shine in their faith for all to see proudly.  That girl can sure rub off on you, which can only be a good thing.  She is now, and always will be an example to anyone who is facing darkness, on how to find God's light.  Hey girl, God bless ya!  God bless our Becca too, but I think she has that one covered   herself pretty well.
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4 posted 2005-02-03 10:14 PM


OH my sweet maree...



she is indeed lifted up by her wings and no ma'am, not too late

Becky is a part of everything now.

*hugging you hard*

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5 posted 2005-02-03 10:20 PM




Beautiful...she is with God now.

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6 posted 2005-02-03 10:20 PM


Maree...your timing
is always there with
the Angels...

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7 posted 2005-02-03 10:37 PM


I had forgotten to mention to you in my earlier post that I sent this poem onto Rae, Becca's Mom to read to her earlier today.

Maree, I too have been lifted, and certainly even shoved with those wings of Becca's myself on occasion.  She will be one great angel that girl, as she was sure an earth angel loved by so many!

May she now rest in peace with her God.

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8 posted 2005-02-03 10:43 PM


hankie alert what a doll you are Maree, whew! such a tender beautiful thank you to our very own White Dove
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9 posted 2005-02-03 11:42 PM


Maree...Your love is very special still, to her!  
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10 posted 2005-02-04 08:18 AM


Maree...what a wonderful tribute to one who carried many of us on her wings
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11 posted 2005-02-04 08:51 AM


loving words, Maree

M

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12 posted 2005-02-04 08:54 AM


holding you and her family all tightly...and knowing with peace that an angel has gone home.  HUGS
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13 posted 2005-02-04 08:56 AM


beautiful as she must have been
somewhere she flies not far from
where  your words took flight

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14 posted 2005-02-04 10:16 AM


beautiful
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