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I couldn't move
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I couldn't move |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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We were escorted to our table for two There in Williamsburg Soft music, low lights You looked so softly into my eyes Whilst taking my hand in yours Playing with each finger, affectionately I was caught by surprise & in the moment… One by one, you singled each finger out.. Whispering, my thumb reminded you Of a great enthusiasm for life The index finger reminded you Of my sensuality…while silent in mine essense The middle finger of a long journey One of which you’d hope we’d take together Skipping my ring finger Tenderly kissing my pinky You said…”this one is the beauty of your smile, your inner being” Then, slowly but confidently…moving back to my ring finger You held it for a moment…silent…looking deeply into me Then spoke….”and this one, we’ll discuss anon” I couldn’t move… |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Oh Lee, Wish I were sitting just behind you so I could have shared those words.Lucky you..best marty |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
it's those memories of special moments that makes one feel alive~~ loved it, Lee thank you  M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ A soft and lovely write. You are a joy good morniing sweet. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent my friend. Great write!! JL  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you for always sharing |
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