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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-02-03 09:04 AM



The moon
rises

big and round
out of the evening sea.

It seems
so near,
just over there,

as if
you could walk to its side
to talk: of love,

life,
night,
this universe
so aglow with stars,

the years
you've known,
and those
to come...

but most of all...
of love.


© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Catrina
Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132

1 posted 2005-02-03 09:07 AM



Love on the silver platter...
Yes...

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-02-03 09:20 AM


love is the efference of all things
both good bad and inbetween
it is a sanctity
a glow of all knowing
wide and deeply deep
unto those who trust it's glory
and then, doth the wind of paradise embrace
what smiles the whole of meaning
to a place, a place of serene lush green
a completedness
compromise
the prize of giving, taking and humbleness
care to the side of ocean realms
tendernes to it's smile
great awareness to follow
admiration and graditude for the journey
Give me your dreams to be safe
your pain and awareness
let me tender amidst the rain
I want to feel your emotions
all of them
doth sky partake of heaven's necture?
In true meaning of what is...
embrace all of mankind
to give love as much as know it....


Hi John, good morning...now see what you've inspired...
tremendous write...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2005-02-03 11:15 AM


beauty in these words
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