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Swinging Doors
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Swinging Doors |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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An inside scream letting out the thoughts that today is going to be one of those days wishing the start to be different. How easily it use to be to smile at the world, freedom not just a seven letter word but a paragraph of happiness. To be someone else, anyone else, just for a day, through a door that swings both ways for once, to then appreciate who I am, and take away the feelings of vacant stares and whispered pain. I've seen myself inside out not liking the x ray upon meeting the two but knowing that taking care of one heals the other.. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 It's early here... my eyes almost read something else and so, check your e-mail... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It's always too early here...for me  M |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"wishing the start to be different" Dear "M" - It's up to us to make our own "starts" - we just need to look at things "differently". I sometimes see/feel such amazing things in the mundane ordinary that I surprise myself. But a good write as usual. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Doors swing and open differently each day M, tommorow they may reveal beauty.... Thank you... Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
you know the problem with swinging doors is that if you remain stationary the tend to pop you in the behind which brings about hind sight. best to move on |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I've seen myself inside out not liking the x ray upon meeting the two but knowing that taking care of one heals the other.. Bravo, bravo...such a pretty way to say it.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
reminds me of that movie Freaky Friday where the mother and daughter changed places...it would be nice to just be someone else for a day but only for a day  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“I've seen myself inside out not liking the x ray upon meeting the two” Self examination does do wonders. Enjoyed this write very much. JL |
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