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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-02-02 10:04 PM



You are divinity
dressed in sensuality
feeding passions fire
smothered in desire
all wrapped up
and candy kissed

you charmed me
by looking
only into my eyes...

see how they smile?



(told ya I'd be back.     )


The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2005-02-02 10:29 PM


you are all that and more....

yeah I am lovin this! thank you and well done

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2005-02-02 10:34 PM


OMG L~ You just gave me the biggest smile of my day....thank you for this challenge....
it was very reminiscint of other places and times.    
You know me when I write intensely... and yeah, I couldn't help myself, I DID have to say it   rotflmao.  
Loved this challenge, a good one to get an old muse kick started!

Susan
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-02-02 11:24 PM


Challenge well met -

Nice to see your warm and cuddlies -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2005-02-03 07:42 AM



A pretty petit four...

*wink*

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
5 posted 2005-02-03 08:43 AM


ms gs...such a sweet way
of presenting the thoughts

LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-02-03 08:51 AM


ahhh, tender music you have strummed here
as your heart, wide eyed and always smiling...tremendous lady poetess

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