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To all that was once green (Valentines Challenge)
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To all that was once green (Valentines Challenge) |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Even now we can no longer remember how much of the world we gave up we wore the scent as lightness, a butterfly cloaked in streams of silver linings and evenings slow decent to something familiar-- between days as they open to night and I imagine you in fragrance of morning a ghost walking away from the amber of memory it comes too from the ache of stones and grains of sand laying heavy upon earth that I would pass through this journey along the lines of time that wore the cold of December I've pressed my palms to this place before so he could see inside me and touch the roots of my being for this seasons return I pray as I write these pages for the smoke to rise while we find the way to speak those words when I awoke the window sills were wet from the passing storm and the garden still sits in silence waiting for the bloom "to all that was once green" ~~*~~ My Shadow is the only one that walks beside me ~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
many favorite lines here (of course, you always do that to me) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
gawd L. you already know I don't have the words for this one. And, how did you know green was my fav color?? lol. Hugs you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes Ah the symble of green I know what you mean. Hugs |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lauren You always seem to touch on something my heart knows.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady lauren your heart always shows damn nice view too |
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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
WOWWWW! This was very good.   |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
You intermingle nature, memories, and love so beautifully here and what I like the best from your poem is the promise of bloom. I do soooo look forward to spring. Enjoyed reading and I do think that you exceeded here on this challenge. Very Good. -Bob |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I've pressed my palms to this place before so he could see inside me and touch the roots of my being You know...I loved how I thought about those lines. Stopped to think them 3 time I did  and all three times, I felt it a window to a soul. Loved this Lauren. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Lovely write!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
for this seasons return I pray as I write these pages for the smoke to rise while we find the way to speak those words lovely, Lauren M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Back to the top as we get closer to the moment...  |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
December grows cold in too many ways and the memory of green fades . . . enjoyed, nevertheless e |
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