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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-02-02 11:06 AM



I see kittens
in your hair.

To them
you are the God they choose.

Because your eyes
make them unafraid.

Because your joy,...
amid such innocence,

fills their lives

with wonder.

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-02-02 11:34 AM


this is precious
LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-02-02 03:15 PM


beautiful, reminds me so much of my grand daughter
Martie
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3 posted 2005-02-02 03:44 PM


How lovely this is!
Honeybunch
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4 posted 2005-02-02 04:33 PM


"Because your eyes
make them unafraid."

Absolutely right - the eyes say it all.  A tender write!

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5 posted 2005-02-02 06:46 PM


Beautiful write!

~Alli~

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JL
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6 posted 2005-02-02 07:38 PM


Very interesting.  Kittens in your hair.
Soft…

JL



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