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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2005-02-02 09:36 AM


Today I am a redhead
yesterday I was blonde
did you really believe
that the fire was really gone?

You'll probably never notice it
because you’re still to blind to see
I'm not the one who's changed
wake up baby, I'm still me.

Yes I was a tie dyed blonde
and I guess that you truly thought
  that old time saying was true,
    but naive, I've never been
       I see the many colors of you.


{for my color challenge}


The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-02-2005 11:35 AM).]

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-02-02 09:39 AM


wull, could be blond walnut...eyyyy?????

hugs, and smiles....enjoyable

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
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In Your Poetic Mind
2 posted 2005-02-02 09:41 AM


you go girl....the fire is not out yet....

hugssss you

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

choshi
Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184
New York
3 posted 2005-02-02 10:11 AM


"...I'm not the one who's changed
wake up baby, I'm still me."

I love this paricular line [and the rest of the poem too]

~P

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-02-02 10:30 AM


we're all redheaded vixens, blonde bombshells and brownette intellects inside - you wear your colors well -

Enjoyed -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2005-02-02 10:35 AM


Gentle,
Like your new picture and enjoyed the write.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2005-02-02 11:25 AM


I'm not really up for a challenge today, but I'll enjoy reading
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