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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-02-02 09:02 AM


you asked
was it for me
the intention
sticking out there
like a stop sign
red headed
but willing to go

I talked to your eyes
you had seen them before
and didn't really need
instructions
on how to drive
down that road
you spoke of often

and how you came
to expect that feeling
every time now
when passing certain
considerations
that you would never
have before

but want to more often now
___________

Dark

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-02-02 09:07 AM


a birthday party of emotions, new and meaningful...ones she's never experienced before, but has come to look forward to...

Your a peach...you give her happiness and good experience...treasure...you!

MGROVES
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Member Elite
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
2 posted 2005-02-02 09:10 AM


whispers spoken softly
heard loudly~


Catrina
Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132

3 posted 2005-02-02 09:33 AM



Nothing pedestrian
about your writing,

even they wave
at your passenger


Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-02-02 10:26 AM


passing those considerations, on the right hand side - rearview mirror now - am speeding down my road to heaven -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-02-02 10:31 AM


I talked to your eyes
you had seen them before
and didn't really need
instructions
on how to drive
down that road
you spoke of often

and how you came
to expect that feeling
every time now
when passing certain
considerations
that you would never
have before

***************
Big grins here D....
~D~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2005-02-02 11:23 AM


good write
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
7 posted 2005-02-03 02:05 PM



I'll never look
at a stop sign
the same...

Excellent work, Sir.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
8 posted 2005-02-03 10:59 PM


I talked to your eyes
you had seen them before
and didn't really need
instructions

you do eyespeak as good as kittyspeak
you just make me purr, what can i say?

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