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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-02-02 07:20 AM


long legged lovely
got her sigh sin on
velvet metalic
gradual gain

we touch our eyes
to ends
and hand handle
hidden

making us move
our grooves
onto the groove reader's
need

doing 33 and one third
whispering stereo
surround sounding

some hedonic eden


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MGROVES
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1 posted 2005-02-02 07:59 AM


window's open~
hem's up~
legs set to groove~
waiting for whispers
to spin a tune of
sin~

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Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2005-02-02 08:07 AM


Ms G..hedon (this one) is the eden most folks try to get to..even solo it has no fences
only windows..thanks for the eyes

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-02-02 08:20 AM


hehe...a place between places....

especially enjoyed

doing 33 and one third
whispering stereo
surround sounding


I'll think differently about my home theator from now on....

You rock!

Morning


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-02-02 08:21 AM


lee j..
spin a couple
of thought roundies for me
hugs lady friend

Catrina
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5 posted 2005-02-02 09:31 AM



33 and one third

the longplaypull
of memories
evoke soft sounds
but let the record scratch...
if it finishes before...

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2005-02-02 09:40 AM


ms kitty, just keep playin em
over and over and
well you know


Susan
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walking the surreal
7 posted 2005-02-02 10:22 AM


you spin me round, baby, right round, like a record baby, round, round, right round -

Mmmmmm - you play my soft D -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
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8 posted 2005-02-02 11:41 AM


nice
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9 posted 2005-02-02 12:36 PM


hey D lets take her for a ride.....I am geared up and ready to go....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2005-02-02 02:42 PM


susan,
something spinful
would be my pleasure
thanks lover


______________


ps..you are so nice
for your nices
_____________

lady lauren
bring that lady of you on down
hiway 1 is sunny
and the black itch is itchin
thanks lady

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11 posted 2005-02-02 09:07 PM


i wouldnt mind riding on your highway~
to the sound of an ol 33 spinning~
slowly making way
to eden~

better yet on a harley going up the coast


serenity blaze
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12 posted 2005-02-02 10:13 PM


I'm so relieved.

I read the title and thought you'd started practicing law.

And as for whether your readers get the groove, just keep playing the tunes.

Enjoyed.

Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2005-02-02 10:16 PM


well and here I thought that was 34 and 1/2....

enjoyed the tunes babe, well done.

inkedgoddess
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14 posted 2005-02-02 11:00 PM


i am a bowling pin

you are the lane

let the big boy strike me

let me feel all your pain

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