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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2005-02-01 05:52 PM


Togetherness, two singles joined as an whole
lovers without words flesh upon flesh
dried passions turned to raw lust
take me as a freind not a man out of love.

talk is cheap no need to pay to get by
love is found not in an alley but in the mind
dreamers dream of such love in their sleep
thinking of sex not the walk on the beach
waking to find a one-night-stand off the street

You make me laugh, you'd make me cry
as you walk away things to do in the day
never thinking of you without the clothes
always the girl that i loved i suppose


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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2005-02-01 10:18 PM


o i'd like to do the alley cat with one so lovely

lighten up

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-02-02 05:55 AM


You make me laugh, you'd make me cry
as you walk away things to do in the day
(never thinking of you without the clothes
always the girl that i loved i suppose)

This was so respectful and sweet...loved these lines...

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-02-02 08:52 AM


love is truly all emotions...and it ain't always whistlin Dixie...no pun intended, but as an old love once told me...Love is hard work...
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2005-02-02 12:39 PM


good write here
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