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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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do you see me? standing here – pressed to glass naked bare soul stripped – leaning against windowed pain waiting for finger prints pressed and smeared to trace my breast and the heart that lies there in the reflection – i see your eyes piercing with love without disguise and I melt into a rainbow of colors stained upon glass s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a thought! wow! very creative! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
wear my eyes and my whispers let the glass be our fragile sky you are lovely here you stir me susan |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
mmmmmmmm can we all cum together now? very sinfully loverly |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Great imagery in such a compact write. Enjoyed Poets against the war is redundant |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Superbo! I love your hot stuff! With writing like this you are sure to get the sap running in trees early this year! lol I really do adore this new photo of you! You look great and more of your spirit is showing!  Hugs with love, Linda |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you dear friends - glad you enjoyed my fragile upon glass - Dixie - thanks for the wow dear friend Dark - you light the colors upon the glass Inkked one - you gift me smiles and slightly wicked ones at that  RS - thank you for your kindness Linda - you sweetie pie - thanks for the compliment on the pic - I like it better too Hugs and love to all - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I just feel sorry for the window cleaner and I am joking. Beautiful words but leaving unsaid the steam of passion that covers the window of the soul. Dave |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Eric - thank you Dave - you made me chuckle - thanks  Hugs both - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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