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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2005-02-01 02:04 AM


Reality is born from integrated minds
in eager response to energetic growth
and experimental life its enlightenment.    

I, the forsaken, vehicle of all knowing
and vessel of emotion,
provide the tuck and stitch
for reality’s survival
while threads of personality
entwined and combined
lend authenticity
to its existence.

Reality’s obedience to mind’s every whim,
no rarity on earth or unusual occurrence,
exceeds and goes beyond normal expectation
and bears well the fruit of experimental labours.  

And too I’m called to obey,
lift arms to love and hate,
and embrace pain’s embarrassment
as substantiating evidence
of regenerating power.

Time and reality still eons apart
force me to inculcate, assimilate, disperse,
fragmented elements of each experiment
as if I was a mailman on duty every day.

But essentially now my reality is born
from past forays into the all and everything  
and in the casting of reflections grows to adulthood
way beyond the knowing of these present times.  

When children stop midway and cease endless play
and the circle of life remains a static sphere
then time has caught up with the reality of love
and no man can ignore or indeed put asunder
the final and lasting amazing creation
of integrated minds!

Perhaps/maybe ...

© Copyright 2005 Helen - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2005-02-01 02:13 AM


"When children stop midway and cease endless play
and the circle of life remains a static sphere
then time has caught up with the reality of love
and no man can ignore or indeed put asunder
the final and lasting amazing creation
of integrated minds!"

Beautiful, Helen!  I love your thinking tonight!  Sounds very Edgar Cayce in a way.   ......jo

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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2 posted 2005-02-01 03:20 AM


Thanks, Jo.  My thinking comes in the morning after the night's silent input.  Yes, I do think that's how it works.  My best to you.
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2005-02-01 03:46 AM


"lift arms to love and hate,"

smiling because we do, whether we know it or not.

I loved the soul search and just the ownership of the tone.

You just planted a flag.

nice work lovie

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2005-02-01 09:46 AM


Thank you, sb, for the read.  Now, if only I could say all that in a few words, I'd be happy.  
Ericc
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5 posted 2005-02-01 03:23 PM


Wow...amazing write!

Eric

Martie
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6 posted 2005-02-01 10:38 PM


Helen

" no man can ignore or indeed put asunder
the final and lasting amazing creation
of integrated minds!"

I do enjoy the wonderful way your mind works....it is a beautiful thing!  

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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7 posted 2005-02-01 10:41 PM


Thank you, Eric.  I do appreciate the read.
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2005-02-02 12:55 PM


wow!
Honeybunch
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9 posted 2005-02-02 02:27 AM


Hmm?  Beautiul thing, Martie?  Thank you but ... even beauty is denied the fullness of love - poetic expression.

Dixie - thanks for the "wow".

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