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Open Poetry #34

a very good year

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2005-02-01 12:58 PM

"How's the wine?"
He peered at me
the glass was winking trick of light
zipless
as I licked my lips
in prayer I'd said that silently
blushing mad chablis
I smiled
fidgeting the parch...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-02-01 02:25 AM

I love your writing!!!!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2005-02-01 04:49 AM

Great imagery here gorgeous, I could see it all.

another for the library

Mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2005-02-01 07:16 AM

I feel like I stepped in a room
and stepped right back out, but Karen?

I want the beginning and the end
or the middle, or the rest of this!

*smile*

perfection, Lady, as always

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-02-01 01:14 PM

what a moment

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

5 posted 2005-02-01 01:20 PM

Like Sue says, you give us a paragraph, but ot the story. Well done. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-02-01 01:35 PM

Yeah, what Ken said about Sue...

More, please.

Plate's empty!

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