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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-02-01 12:47 PM



~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

© Copyright 2005 Snow - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2005-02-01 03:29 AM


You, lady, just expressed the inexpressible.

*smile*

I wish I'd found the words. thank you

I thought this stunning.

iliana
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2 posted 2005-02-01 03:39 AM


REALLY FANTASTIC, Snow!   ....jo
ice
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3 posted 2005-02-01 07:02 AM


An incredible picture, and the verse got this country boys heart 'ta beatin' faster...
Just what I need this morning to wake me up..

Beautiful poetry, Snow...enjoyed
__________ice/ford
   ><>

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-02-01 09:22 AM


snowy

as he tickled her ribs
and then under her ear

she said
merry me merry me merry me

enjoyed your romance here lady

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2005-02-01 09:26 AM


I feel so much of what you write Snow,
damn,
this is beautiful..


passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-02-01 01:09 PM


damn!
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7 posted 2005-02-04 11:53 PM


Nice...James
EvocativeVerse2
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8 posted 2005-02-04 11:59 PM


Love it! Yup I do! This is a wonderful poem milady!
Aenimal
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9 posted 2005-02-05 12:39 PM


simply amazing
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10 posted 2005-02-05 07:35 AM


Gentle, but urgent in the right places, you caress the strings of the heart, with doleful beautiful music as backgound sound...thank you...

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2005-02-05 07:58 AM


I marry you, I marry you, I marry you...I know I just saw this somewhere and can't recall which movie...

love your presentations and of course the meanings behind your words...

M

serenity blaze
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12 posted 2005-02-05 09:15 AM


"while we slip through chords...please"

now this is perfect usage of ellipses

(calling all Kamlas)

but yes, lady

this is loving hunger

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13 posted 2005-02-05 07:20 PM


Very nice!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000*    Journal!

vandana
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14 posted 2005-02-06 10:48 AM


enjoyed
Soulfisher
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15 posted 2005-02-06 12:48 PM


calused hands featherd over silken skin the
ripple of goose bumps go out in lip biting silence. and I I go to bed where I belong. thank you for another stiring write


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16 posted 2005-02-08 12:52 PM


I wanted to reply to this over the weekend... but my computer kept freezing up on me. *S*

It's one that stays easily on the mind... one that's going into my library for the pleasure of many readings... though I expect each read will end with me thinking "I wish I'd written this." *S*

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